Negative All Around

It's geting harder, drifting farther.., until im slowly some where else, hideing in this 
soo called hole, cant deal with this  pain thats felt.., its like take one step forward, 
just too take two steps back, get smacked off track, this to me is becoming a known 
fact..., it's all in the way that you react..., give back..., still tring too get a positive 
and a negative to attract!!!
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March 13, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Nice narrative with good expressions, tara
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