Needless Is Strife

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Needless is strife, in our short life As we live out this dream Sheath forever, the butcher’s knife Let love throbs in heart stream Life goes on anyway Let love be our mainstay Pulsating night and day Be thee bliss rife Needless is strife 30-June-2022 Quietus

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Jenna Logan

Date: 6/30/2022 9:23:00 AM

I definitely agree with your philosophy, but please tell me how NOT to worry. I haven't written a quietus in some time. I should give it another go. Nicely written, Seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 10:04:00 AM

Once we’re nonchalant to outcomes, becoming a witness to life as it flows, thoughts cease, we abide in stillness and worries are no more. All that is, is bliss in renewal. Within.

Catie Lindsey

Date: 6/30/2022 8:44:00 AM

Very inspiring poem, unseeking seeker. I was noticing your star of David, and it reminds me that our Makaba is in our own hands. Very nice. Catie :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/30/2022 10:02:00 AM

Star of David, yes, it corresponds to the heart chakra in Tantra