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Needles In the Snow

The pain of feeling helpless is so great It pricks the heart like needles in the snow If I could cure the sadness that you feel With love, pure joy is all you’d ever know Though you may smile, your eyes belie your grin Their hazel beauty now a black tableau I too can feel the sting of your torment It pricks my heart like needles in the snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/19/2017 8:24:00 AM
A lovely write, Mike:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2017 8:29:00 AM
thanks Daniel
Date: 7/18/2017 1:21:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem written with understanding, empathy and such loving care :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi

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