Needles and Pins

Watching your fave
In the closest of matches
Feels like having an itch
With no way to make scratches.

You sit there on needles
And pins on your seat
Hoping that his opponent
Will suffer defeat.

The crowd starts to cheer
As the underdog inches
Much closer to winning;
They hope that he clinches.

Yet you cling to hope
With your stomach in knots.
If your fave doesn’t win
You believe you will plotz.*

The minutes tick by
And you can’t comprehend
That the match may not go
How you want it to end.

*to be overcome by strong emotion (Yiddish)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 9:56 AM
- Tension in the air, Ilene :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Johnson Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Yes, needles and pins is what my butt feels like because the matches are so long sometimes. :)
Rigoler Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 8:31 PM
I'm not a tennis buff, Ilene, but I felt bad when the other player lost (his name escapes me at the moment).Thanks for another new Yiddish word to add to my meager Yiddish vocabulary. / M
Leffanta Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:18 PM
You nailed it with the first verse! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, Rico!
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Hope your fave wins for your team Ilene, have a fun evening:-) hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Thanks, Jan! My fave, Rafael Nadal, just won the US Open Tennis Championship in 5 sets!
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