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Needles and Pins

Watching your fave In the closest of matches Feels like having an itch With no way to make scratches. You sit there on needles And pins on your seat Hoping that his opponent Will suffer defeat. The crowd starts to cheer As the underdog inches Much closer to winning; They hope that he clinches. Yet you cling to hope With your stomach in knots. If your fave doesn’t win You believe you will plotz.* The minutes tick by And you can’t comprehend That the match may not go How you want it to end. *to be overcome by strong emotion (Yiddish)

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Date: 9/13/2019 9:56:00 AM
- Tension in the air, Ilene :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2019 9:25:00 AM
Yes, needles and pins is what my butt feels like because the matches are so long sometimes. :)
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Date: 9/9/2019 8:31:00 PM
I'm not a tennis buff, Ilene, but I felt bad when the other player lost (his name escapes me at the moment).Thanks for another new Yiddish word to add to my meager Yiddish vocabulary. / M
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Date: 9/8/2019 8:18:00 PM
You nailed it with the first verse! Aloha! Rico
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/8/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Rico!
Date: 9/8/2019 7:48:00 PM
Hope your fave wins for your team Ilene, have a fun evening:-) hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/8/2019 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! My fave, Rafael Nadal, just won the US Open Tennis Championship in 5 sets!

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