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Needle In the Hay

Sitting by some hay Doing some quick needlework I drop the needle
Russell Sivey Entrant into Dana'lynn Smith's "Needle in the Hay" contest 3/1/2012

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Date: 6/1/2012 1:50:00 PM
Russell congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:42:00 PM
hahaha, this one struck me as quite clever! good one, Russell. Gotta check out this contest.
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:56:00 PM
oops... funny Russell, I agree well done, yes you sure do like your short forms that is easy to see. Thanks for my placement in your Sedoka Contest.
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:49:00 PM
subtle little kind of twist, well done Russell, love it ta bits....
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:44:00 PM
gawddd.. yuo turned the theme around and made ot really awesome.. love it, russell.. winning wihes woth lotsa huggs!:)
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:41:00 PM
LOL, had a chuckle at this witty write, Russell
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Date: 3/1/2012 10:01:00 AM
well an impressive visual Russell.. now to find that needles .. an impressive feat .. good luck in contest luv..
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:33:00 AM
Very nice take on the contest theme Russel.Enjoyed your senryu.Best wishes.
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