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Needle In the Hay

Sitting by some hay
Doing some quick needlework
I drop the needle

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Dana'lynn Smith's "Needle in the Hay" contest

3/1/2012

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2012

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June 1, 2012 at 1:50 PM

Russell congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 1, 2012 at 1:23 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2012 at 6:42 PM

hahaha, this one struck me as quite clever! good one, Russell. Gotta check out this contest.

Broken Butterfly

March 1, 2012 at 1:56 PM

oops... funny Russell, I agree well done, yes you sure do like your short forms that is easy to see. Thanks for my placement in your Sedoka Contest.

March 1, 2012 at 1:49 PM

subtle little kind of twist, well done Russell, love it ta bits....

March 1, 2012 at 1:44 PM

gawddd.. yuo turned the theme around and made ot really awesome.. love it, russell.. winning wihes woth lotsa huggs!:)

March 1, 2012 at 12:41 PM

LOL, had a chuckle at this witty write, Russell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 1, 2012 at 10:01 AM

well an impressive visual Russell.. now to find that needles .. an impressive feat .. good luck in contest luv..

March 1, 2012 at 12:33 AM

Very nice take on the contest theme Russel.Enjoyed your senryu.Best wishes.

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