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Needing You

Need a place to escape to, but nowhere left to run except perhaps down a bottle or inside a loaded gun need a place to hide in because you left me so exposed took my heart to open air watched it decompose. I need you like i did back when your hand was mine to hold, down the bottle, unload the gun and feel yourself run cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/28/2009 10:33:00 AM
it's crazy how u can feel when the one who you thought was the one leaves you but again sis it might hurt but dnt let him or anyone else make you feel as though your life isn't worth it without them... PEACE
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:05:00 AM
SISTER please get over this man he is not worth your time you have a long life to live keep writing
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:12:00 PM
sometimes I feel like this too... Hugs to you good poem
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