Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Need You To Say Goodbye

Her Voice always outspoken. 
Unless it came to you. 
Quick to give the benefit 
of the doubt
Only to see your deceit shine
through 

Her Voice was ruled
by her heart, 
Thought herself unfair 
putting you before all others
hoping that you would care

But yet her voice could 
not tell you goodbye .
Your love took away 
her voice 
You have a hold 
upon her
Taking away her choice

She needs to hear you
say good bye, 
You make her 
voice unsure
You take her breath 
her gentle sigh
Only you can take her 
pain leaving her heart pure

7/4/2020

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Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 2:26 PM Congrats with your win in this contest. Wonderful writing! Brenda Chiri July 11, 2020 at 2:32 PM Andrea thank you!;)

William Kelii Kekaula July 6, 2020 at 9:26 PM A regrettable love affair shared through your illuminating expressions, Brenda, my compliments truly for your wondrous endeavors, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 9:28 PM William thank you so much! I’m so glad I’m back!;)

John Watt July 6, 2020 at 2:50 PM A beautiful write of a tragic relationship. Well done, Brenda, and congratulations on your #1 win ~ John Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 4:40 PM Thx so much John!;)

L. J. Carber July 6, 2020 at 12:23 PM Congrats Brenda, on your well deserved 1st place win-- a most brave poem Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 2:25 PM Thank you I appreciate your visit!;) hope all is well with you!;)

Sam Kauffman July 6, 2020 at 12:12 PM Such a troubled and disfunctional relationship painted by your words, Brenda. You have perfectly described the inertia caused by abuse. Congratulations on your top win. Great to see you back! Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 12:16 PM Thank you so very much! So happy to be reading you again!;)

Gershon Wolf July 6, 2020 at 12:09 PM Wow! Congrats on your top of the heap winner in Brian's contest, Brenda! Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 12:16 PM Gershon always welcome your words! Thank you my silly friend!;)

Jeanne Mcgee July 6, 2020 at 10:03 AM A beautiful introspection on abuse. Great write Brenda. Congrats on your top win. Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 12:08 PM So subtle yet right in view ! Thank you my friend!;) Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 11:52 AM So subtle yet right in view ! Thank you my friend!;)

JC Brul July 6, 2020 at 9:22 AM Oh so sad! Sometimes goodbye is the only choice we could make. Congratulations on your awesome TOP WIN. Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 11:51 AM Thank you so much I really appreciate it!;)

Vijay Pandit July 6, 2020 at 6:02 AM Awesome write--congrats on your TOP win, Brenda. Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 6:05 AM Ahh Vijay thank you so very much!;)

Kai Michael Neumann July 5, 2020 at 6:01 AM Very sad story. But/and a worthy winner. Kind wishes, Kai Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 6:57 AM Kai so happy to see you my friend seems like it’s been forever! Thank you so much!;)

John Gondolf July 4, 2020 at 11:22 AM A sad piece, Bren, one must not let their thoughts be silenced by someone else. Hope all is well with you. Happy 4th. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 6:56 AM So very true John! Sometimes tho some give others too much power!;) thank you and happy 4th to you!;)