Need a Change

i wake up to go round and round
in the circles your running around me
the same things, days they never change
waking up to repeat it all the same

you repeat yourself, wording never changed
same tone of voice, everything the same
it's like you plan things to never change
like some weird compulsory obsession

because you never change
and it gets me so frustrated
the days too neat, too uncomplicated
I want a challenge, I need a change

you wonder why I get in a mood
too bitter maybe even a little rude
how many times that i have say
i want a challenge, i need a change
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Belt Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Great write Crystal.....Larry
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June 18, 2010 at 8:13 PM
interesting write, enjoyed the read..P.D.
Spence Sr Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 2:59 PM
This is excellent. One must be able to express what is inside. I like the essence of this poem. Great job! Joseph
Drover Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Excellent description of being stuck in one of life's debilitating patterns. Great write.
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