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"How Do I Love Thee" 

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love thee to the level of every day’s
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.

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"How Do I Need Thee" - Sequel

How do I need thee? Let me count the ways.
I need thee beneath the safe harbor tides.
Your ebb flow reaches my peak as I cry.
Continuum leaves need soil within,
The breadth of life needs to live, not rescind.
I need thee in silence as quiet hides.
I need thee in death, I wither in life.
I need thee without seen regret, infringed.
Allowing rising east skies, sun sets west.
I need thee to bathe, vessels deep inside,
Within opposition, entwined, bequest.
Perceived with love, continued while descried.
Songs in tune, sweet man, us dancing abreast,
I need thee til' death, together astride.
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Date Written: February 11, 2016
For the contest, Second Chance, Sponsor, Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is well deserving of its placement. I do remember this contest. Your words exude Love from the heart as they flow down the page. Your words sing so gently into the heart, a lullaby of Love's grace. I read this excellent work and i float on the breath of a sigh. A seven and into my faves Laura....Vlad.
Raven Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 5:58 PM
IT Is both, Vladislav is my writing name, Mike is my real name. I answer to either Laura. Take your pick. Hugs....MIKE.
Scars Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Awww...thank you very much! :)-luloo ps..is it Mike or Vlad? Maybe both? :)
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Great work, well done, congratulations!
Scars Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:44 AM
A lovely Sonnet sequel. Laura. So pleased for you that your poem received the placement it deserves in Broken Wings' contest. Congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Thank you sweet lady Sandra :)-luloo
Bugnacki Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:06 PM
lulu-I read this the other nioght, and again tonight and I guess I was going to say the other night how much this touched me. Is it for a contest? If so, good luck <3
Scars Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Katie, yes it is for a contest called "How Do I Love Thee". Soupmail me if you need help entering a contest. I'm more than willing to help I have been in your shoes not too long ago *smiles* -Thanks again -luloo
Sage Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:32 AM
wow! this is just lovely, well penned sequel Laura, excellent
Scars Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Thank you White Sage :)*smiles* -luloo
Allison Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:02 PM
gosh Luloo a lovely sonnet good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thank you lady *smiles* -luloo
B. Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 2:26 PM
This is a beauty! Way to go :)
Scars Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Carol :) *Smiles* -luloo
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