'neath the Willow

Let me write a couple lines
  before I go to sleep

I promise not to burden you
  nor to make you cry or weep

Lay your face down on the pillow
  on the shoreline 'neath the willow

May you the sandman sprinkle
  with dreams of stars that twinkle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:59 PM
delicate and pretty, lets me relax.
Flood Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Love it, Gershon. No more counting sheep for me. If I can’t sleep, I’ll recite this to myself. [No, I’m not saying your poetry puts me to sleep - honest]. I adore ‘on the shoreline ’neath the willow . Terry
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Terry, pleasant dreams to you, my friend. Peace, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:40 AM
A lovely little poem, Gershon, which makes the heart sing before a good night's rest.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Sounds like it works for you, Milt. Sleep tight! ~ gw
Sands Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 7:45 AM
This is sweet and peaceful Gershon. A Fave :)
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:30 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE, Heidi. Happiness Always, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Serene tranquility abounds for this dreamer- just as surround sounds. Good one! Hugs and blessings Gordon, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Glad you like it. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 6:23 AM
A tranquil scene Gershon. Tom
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Tranquil -- without any tranquilizers; au-natural! Thanks, Tom. :) gw
Boles Avatar
July 10, 2021 at 10:07 PM
The quietude in this piece is gently wrapped in sheer beauty Gershon!...ab
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Thank you for such a lovely, wonderful comment, Anselmo. You've got me swinging on a star! :) gw
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