Neath the Skies

a vernal breeze
blows through 
the mist,
the vanishing 
tree-tops glimpsed
now&then,
across the terrace
baroque&beautiful 
visions
         perceived-
contradictions
to marvel&muse,
contemplate in
nature's secret
splendour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krampe Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 6:12 PM
I can see the scene you have painted, Brian. I really like this poem.
Strand Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 3:04 AM
Thanks for your kind words
Sands Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Beautifully written. I enjoyed this Brian :)
Strand Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Heidi
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