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Neath the Skies

a vernal breeze
blows through 
the mist,
the vanishing 
tree-tops glimpsed
now&then,
across the terrace
baroque&beautiful 
visions
         perceived-
contradictions
to marvel&muse,
contemplate in
nature's secret
splendour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/3/2017 6:12:00 PM
I can see the scene you have painted, Brian. I really like this poem.
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/4/2017 3:04:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words
Date: 12/3/2017 7:55:00 AM
Beautifully written. I enjoyed this Brian :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/3/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Heidi

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