Neath Gunmetal Clouds

neath gunmetal clouds
rose bud laid gently
on her grave



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 10:07 PM
You have painted an expansive canvas, at the same time zeroing in on such a tender scene/moment. The universival and the particular: Shakespeare, Milton, Gauthier, not necessarily in that order, of course. Love this one. Fondest wishes, Gershon
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April 16, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Lovely comment, Gershon. LOL a little heavy with the shovel though! LOL LOL LOL Line xx
Cunningham Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:57 PM
A very emotional image Line, many of us can relate to it. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Yes indeed, Tom. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Adams Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:42 PM
A flood of silence, very well put. You really have a way with words and I remain a fan!!!......Wonderful pen!
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Thank you so much, Pat. As you know, the feeling is mutual.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Beautiful imagery Line. A reflection of your lifeexperiences.
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
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