Neath Gunmetal Clouds

neath gunmetal clouds rose bud laid gently on her grave AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on April 14, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2018 10:07:00 PM

You have painted an expansive canvas, at the same time zeroing in on such a tender scene/moment. The universival and the particular: Shakespeare, Milton, Gauthier, not necessarily in that order, of course. Love this one. Fondest wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:34:00 AM

Lovely comment, Gershon. LOL a little heavy with the shovel though! LOL LOL LOL Line xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/15/2018 1:57:00 PM

A very emotional image Line, many of us can relate to it. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 3:57:00 PM

Yes indeed, Tom. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Pat Adams

Date: 4/15/2018 1:42:00 PM

A flood of silence, very well put. You really have a way with words and I remain a fan!!!......Wonderful pen!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pat. As you know, the feeling is mutual.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/14/2018 11:53:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Line. A reflection of your lifeexperiences.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 12:49:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.