Nearing You

I feel so lost in this dream
You're were everything to me
My world my life my love
Come closer I'll come undone 
I hear your voice but it's fading 
Words are lost for all this blaming
I love you, I do for now let go
Hard for you, hard for me no
Lie lie lie lie 
Please say goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 1, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Autumn. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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August 31, 2010 at 6:47 PM
A sad tale - well put together poem though. Peace & Love Matthew Anish.
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