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Nearing You

I feel so lost in this dream You're were everything to me My world my life my love Come closer I'll come undone I hear your voice but it's fading Words are lost for all this blaming I love you, I do for now let go Hard for you, hard for me no Lie lie lie lie Please say goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/1/2010 5:37:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Autumn. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:47:00 PM
A sad tale - well put together poem though. Peace & Love Matthew Anish.
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