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Nearer the Sun

late last night in dreams
I roamed to magical lands
blooms were tall as trees

nearer to warm sun
in rapturous days of gold
giant blooms blushed scents

mauve night rosy dawn
the love affair never ends
peach plum cherry skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:13 AM
Great. Kind wishes, Kai
Buehler Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Kai. :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:26 AM
lovely colorful little poems, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Please accept my humble and heartfelt thanks, Andrea.
One Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Lovely imagery, Especially the last one...
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:38 AM
I'm delighted. Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 3:31 AM
Very descriptive and colorful work. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:14 AM
You are quite welcome, Sara. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem. Thank you. :)
Bangalee Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 1:40 AM
excellent imagination
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 10:53 PM
I had two bad dreams last night. Perhaps you have a way for me to dream better ones. A lovely soothing poem. ~~
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:11 AM
I am glad I wrote this, if it distracted you from bad dreams. Thank you for the lovely compliment. As soon as I can catch up with Sandman, I'll have a serious talk with him, and ask for-no, demand sweet dreams for you. :0
Rodrigues Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 5:08 PM
I want to stand in your imagery!
Buehler Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Why thank you, Kim! That is delightful to know. :)
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