- Near You and Around You -

She's that girl
                                          belongs to the stars
                                        deepest of all mysteries
                                        belongs to the unknown
                                              the purest soul
                                       love the rain and the sea
                                           dance like a goddess
                                            belongs to the wind
                                        heart sings with the bird
                                             belongs to the sun
                                      beautiful as a rose woodtree
                                              She always exist






23.04.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
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Deschler Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:14 PM
I think I am "that girl"!.... I love to surround myself with the beauty and the mystery of nature. Day or night!.... Fantastic poem you've written here, I really enjoyed it! And, thank you once again, for the nice comments on my poem "Autumn's Breath". You have a great weekend, as well, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:22 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Kelly.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Rams Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 4:54 PM
she is " LIFE" WELL DONE
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 1:48 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Louis.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 10:52 AM
Interesting and mysterious work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the visits to my work..Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 12:52 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Moore Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 3:07 PM
very nicely said! good one!
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 3:10 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Connie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mundine Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Refreshingly light, but memorable poem which seems to depict a happy female spirit. Nice!
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 1:12 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Omara Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 4:23 PM
She always exists and is always beautiful - but how ephemeral. Lovely stuff, Anne Lise.-Red
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 3:26 AM
- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
Morrison Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Beautiful piece!
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 5:33 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Kim. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:45 AM
I am having a great day today enjoying your great writes my very dear friend Anne Lise! This one is another very fascinating poem of yours which again, I sooo love it! Thank you so much for sharing your gems & amazing talents. Thank you so much as well for your inspiring comments on my latest poem. More power & blessings to you my very dear friend! love much & big big hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Leonora. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Anglesey Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Beautiful essence of life described perfectly
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 10:47 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Karen, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 5:57 AM
Hello Ms. Anne, sweet poem- so light like a feather in the wind...
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 6:05 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Greg, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Harrell Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 5:45 AM
I love it, Anne-Lise! I think it's in in all of us :). Have a great day! Love ya, Toquyen
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 6:04 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Toquyen, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:30 PM
oh my dear anne, this one hits me like a sweet breeze... you have soul!.. have a sunny friday!..:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:11 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Nette. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
The Heavy Hearted Poet Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 7:57 PM
This poem is exceptionally beautiful. It all makes so much sense. Thank you for stopping by my poem... :)
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:11 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Valerie. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Seal Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Been looking for her all my life Anne Lise. Can you tell me where she is ? lol. Very nice poem, beautifully written. Take care, Richard
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:10 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Richard. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:58 PM
this is so beautiful. As Watisungla said, it uses graceful description.
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:10 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Andrea. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Gildersleeve Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Kindling the mystical 'she' in your image on your penned words. Nicely done Anne. Warm Smiles, Connie
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:09 AM
- Pleasant with good support, your visit makes me happy Connie. - thanks - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ao Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 7:26 AM
You gracefully describes 'she' in this poem..nice work.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 7:27 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Watisungla, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Nair Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:36 AM
A little intriguing, but quite pleasing, A-L, thnx for stopping by!! Jag
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:57 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Jag, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:00 PM
an intriguing write Anne...best wishes..
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 1:06 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Joseph, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Nice mystical poem! I think you should have written "stars" instead of star. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 9:44 AM
- ok, thank you ! I am pleased for your visit and your comment Matthew, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Van Breda Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:28 AM
Loved the format and stunning descriptives you used in this Anne. You are exceptionally talented. Thanks for always stopping by and encouraging my posts xx
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:32 AM
I am pleased for your visit and your comment Kim, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Medida Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:37 AM
A vivid dream
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jonathan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Oyewole Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:33 AM
What a sweet song fiddle in few verse. I really enjoy this deep verse of yours.~ A.O
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 4:38 AM
"heart sings with the bird" and your poem sing with words. Lovely write. Short and sweet poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Michelle Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 8:54 PM
I'd love to know how you got the inspiration for this poem. I love it so much. It's beautiful and solemn and powerful.
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 2:37 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Juli-Michelle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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