Near To God

Once I dreamt Which made me screamed What I saw? I was standing in a row A man there having a bow Some are crying Some are begging For their sins The pain was unbearable They were going through the blood river They stopped that man But he couldn't stop Saying it's your luck As on the earth You were like black buck Now why you cluck Suddenly some one knocked Thank God it's not real All is clear I was near to God In heaven/hell

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/20/2024 4:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.