Near To God

Once I dreamt 
Which made me screamed
What I saw?
I was standing in a row
A man there having a bow

Some are crying 
Some are begging 
For their sins
The pain was unbearable 
They were going through the blood river

They stopped that man
But he couldn't stop
Saying it's your luck
As on the earth 
You were like black buck
Now why you cluck 

Suddenly some one knocked 
Thank God it's not real
All is clear
I was near to God
In heaven/hell

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/20/2024 4:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.