Near Death Experience

( NEAR DEATH EXPERIENCE )

My boyfriend came

over about

6pm.

My

Husband got

off work

early.
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Allison Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 2:37 AM
hilarious! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
Cruz Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Thanks Jan. I hope it wasnt too short. But its to the point lol
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:09 PM
had to laugh beautifully painted
Cruz Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Thanks Liam. I had to write this one :)
Helppi Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Funny!
Cruz Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 2:46 PM
lol thanks Dan glad you liked it :)
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Oh how funny! That would be a near death experience. Good write love and hugs eve
Cruz Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Eve lol glad you liked it
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