Naz My Lovely Child

I used to talk to you when you were in my womb
My love started off a cell and will go till my tomb

Your strong kicks at dark I treasured for kisses
The twirling and spinning for a dancing explicit 

The dagger in my spine for a romantic letter
I would endure gladly no matter how sever

The pain at your birth stint though excruciating 
Holding your warm body was splendid canvas painting

Your fists holding all my breaths within its wrinkles 
Eyes gates to eternity when their stars sparkled

I fed you not only milk but the essence of my soul
Dreaming of you conquering all the unreachable goals

You turned to be a young woman carrying a golden heart
Your hands always giving to the in needs a caring support

God accomplished my destiny by gifting you to us
I would have never lived a full life but obstructing loss

Your smile brightens my days, your tears drown me in ache
I pray that your life will be as fulfilling as God has portrayed

February 11-2016

Written for the contest "My lovely children" Sponsored by Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/11/2016 2:51:00 PM
a lovely tribute to your daughter :-)I feel quite emotional reading these poems motherhood is the best thing ever to happen to me:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Jan and sorry for the late response. I feel truly blessed to be a mom. Hugs, Rahy
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