Naysayers Go Away

Enormous eggplants peppered her Easter hat.
They were a bit heavy, but purple and exact.
However did you find them, and what fun!
The old biddies said, when they saw her in the sun.

Why thank you, she said, pleased as all get out.
Her children had gone on, one with a little pout.
They were dying their eggs, with dye all over their hands.
They were playing their tubas, in their Sunday noon bands.

Rhe sat in the gazebo in her lovely dress of green.
She was the loveliest ghost many had never really seen.
Her delight was apparent, biddies gone away for now.
Her dancing was beautiful; her face was a wow.

She was the best dreamiest dream I had ever had.
She was big and beautiful, buxom busy and bad.
She was her own person, danced to drums of long ago.
Prancing into my head and she did not move slow.

Where did you find her? The fuddy duddies soon asked.
Hilarious, and funny, in her humor I basked.
She’s part of my imagination, I claim her as my own.
So naysayers, go away, you are not part of this poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Breedt Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:20 AM
Caren, I think it was YOU. Lovely read
Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 6:50 AM
It WAS me; it is me, and it will always be me.
Bavington  Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 10:56 PM
I remember Easter hats. Some were cute. Some were hideous. Adding the ghosts was fantastic. I also want to say congratulations on your poetry being put out on poetry soup.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Thank you Bette. I had never tried poetry before, so this is vastly fun for me now!
Jeavons Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 10:21 PM
Such a fun, whimsical poem Caren! Loved it! Hugs, Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 11:49 PM
Thank you my friend!
Duet Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 10:06 PM
I love it, Caren. So clever and entertaining! It brightened my day. :D
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 11:50 PM
I am so glad you liked it. I had fun creating it!
Buck Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Caren: Interesting story. Holds ones interest. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 11:50 PM
Thank you Old Buck. I plan to.
Karim Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:27 PM
I love this poem. This was a brilliant write.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 11:50 PM
I am shocked so many liked it; I had no idea it would be such a hit. Hmmmmm I should try more like this.
Roper Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 8:13 AM
I can just picture those big eggplant purple eggplants on her hat. You surprised me with the ghost. Good flowing and rhyming poem, Caren. I loved reading it, it kept my interest. Hugs eve
Krutsinger Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you Eve. I am all about "keeping interest".
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