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Nayla's Pain

sun shines bleak, cold winds whip death's sting floods her tender eyes daddy is laid to rest

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/5/2014 7:42:00 PM

Again, sorrow is shown to have inspired such a great write. Two things are certain death and tax. While it brings closer the bereaved ones in their sorrow,he latter is better left unsaid here. My sympathy... Kim Patrice.

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2014 11:55:00 AM

Also, thank you for your condolence.

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2014 11:51:00 AM

Hi Kim, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm curious as to what you meant when you said "the latter is better left unsaid here."

Joel Thornton

Date: 12/2/2014 10:32:00 AM

Stunning imagery . Great write! ~Joel

Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/3/2014 9:25:00 AM

Thank you much....I'm curious to know what Image came to your mind when reading this write. I don't know if I should ask that, but I wonder if whoever reads this gets the image that I am trying to convey.