Nayla's Pain

sun shines bleak, cold winds whip
death's sting floods her tender eyes
daddy is laid to rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nunez Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Again, sorrow is shown to have inspired such a great write. Two things are certain death and tax. While it brings closer the bereaved ones in their sorrow,he latter is better left unsaid here. My sympathy... Kim Patrice.
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December 6, 2014 at 11:55 AM
Also, thank you for your condolence.
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December 6, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Hi Kim, Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm curious as to what you meant when you said "the latter is better left unsaid here."
Thornton Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Stunning imagery . Great write! ~Joel
Peranteau Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Thank you much....I'm curious to know what Image came to your mind when reading this write. I don't know if I should ask that, but I wonder if whoever reads this gets the image that I am trying to convey.
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