Nature's Worst

emulating time the tick tock of the rain drops… mud slide devours © Harry J Horsman 2023

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/15/2023 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful, lovely write

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 6/21/2023 1:42:00 PM

lovely write indeed

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/15/2023 8:00:00 AM

Everyone seems to be in such a rush these days. I don't know why? If only we could tame the flooding down to a drizzle, the world would be a calmer place... This haiku creates quite a dramatic image in my mind's eye... Really good writing, my friend! Hope you are doing well :)

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 4/2/2023 10:25:00 AM

lovely write enjoyed.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/24/2023 8:40:00 AM

Hi Harry, my poetry and Yorkshire friend, who knows, perhaps we are even related , Hunt my Maiden surname, powerful 3 lines - intense amount of rain drops happening over a length of time spells disaster, 'mud slide devours' - superb Haiku - hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/21/2023 4:11:00 AM

Harry: If we could only command the weather like they do in Camelot. Wonderful composition, SuZ

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/14/2023 1:22:00 PM

Hi Harry. It’s March and California having flooding. This is weeks of rain and no dams built to catch all the water. Our governor is far from bright. I hope you are on the mend. Prayers for you, Panagiota

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/12/2023 1:51:00 AM

Yes mudslides and avalanches are just waiting to happen. Terrific idea for a poem Harry and so well executed. Sorry its late to comment, I am spending tonight catching up on all I missed. This one is a favorite.