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Nature's Truth

The sunny day, the daisies smiled I captured a dream in the wind Across pastures of many miles Thoughts of things I could rescind Butterflies visited this special place Fluttering designs in the fresh air Under clouds forming expression of a face Life was so vibrant everywhere! Space for imagination to run wild Freedom in the steps of a dance Where stones in the wall were piled New beginnings brought a second chance To find the focus in all of my dreams Sleeping inside, ready to wake Colors were brighter it seemed With nature’s truth, nothing was fake Heidi Sands 12/6/17

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Date: 12/8/2017 9:04:00 AM
Golden glow imagery expressed in this beautiful poem, Heidi. Loved the line ... I captured a dream in the wind. Your pen always paint a brilliant portrait of nature and emotions entwined. You are a most talented poetess. And this is a very evocative write. Pure poetry, my dear friend. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Freddie. Your kind comment means a lot to me. I appreciate it and hope you are well :)
Date: 12/7/2017 8:48:00 AM
Heidi, your love of nature is so very apparent in your writings and I can envision the landscape of dreams, I really enjoyed XXOO Happy Thursday!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2017 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Happy Thursday ! :)
Date: 12/7/2017 7:28:00 AM
Heidi, such a beautiful reverie and beautiful imagery along with it, this brightened my morning. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/7/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thank you John. I am happy it could brighten your morning :) Have a nice day !
Date: 12/6/2017 7:15:00 PM
Beautiful write Heidi, I especially liked the first stanza...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! :)
Date: 12/6/2017 5:04:00 PM
WOW! Beautiful rhythm and meaningful depiction--enjoyed the scenery in your poem--well written, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay! I appreciate your comment. I am happy you like it :)

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