Nature's Sabbath

As the sun preaches,
The birds chirp religious hymns:
Gospel of the rays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Shango Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:37 AM
I love this ... like a temple upon the eye, the poem becomes incense of worship. One love
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April 5, 2010 at 7:54 AM
A glorious tribute in Haiku that covers it all.. beautiful scene and imagery is personified Raul... luv it.. Linda-Marie ...
James Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 12:25 AM
Lovely to read on the Easter weekend
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April 4, 2010 at 11:22 AM
I love the imagery and the devotion of your immense faith. Have a Blesssed and Happy Easter, Raul. Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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April 4, 2010 at 11:18 AM
Beautiful Haiku,Happy Easter to you too,Charma.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 8:23 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Raul. Love Carol and Family
Strand Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 8:15 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Raul.Rgds Brian Lovely last line.
Richards Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Happy Easter Raul!!! Lovely poem!!! :)
Owens Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Very beautifully inspirational...enjoyed...Marty
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April 3, 2010 at 6:48 PM
inspriational poem!
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 5:59 PM
Great metaphoric write..Very descriptive. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 5:32 PM
LOVE IT. Praise to nature! LUv, andrea
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