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Nature's Sabbath

As the sun preaches, The birds chirp religious hymns: Gospel of the rays.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/9/2010 5:37:00 AM
I love this ... like a temple upon the eye, the poem becomes incense of worship. One love
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:54:00 AM
A glorious tribute in Haiku that covers it all.. beautiful scene and imagery is personified Raul... luv it.. Linda-Marie ...
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Date: 4/5/2010 12:25:00 AM
Lovely to read on the Easter weekend
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Date: 4/4/2010 11:22:00 AM
I love the imagery and the devotion of your immense faith. Have a Blesssed and Happy Easter, Raul. Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 4/4/2010 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku,Happy Easter to you too,Charma.
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:23:00 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Raul. Love Carol and Family
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:15:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Raul.Rgds Brian Lovely last line.
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Date: 4/4/2010 7:54:00 AM
Happy Easter Raul!!! Lovely poem!!! :)
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:14:00 PM
Very beautifully inspirational...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 4/3/2010 6:48:00 PM
inspriational poem!
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Date: 4/3/2010 5:59:00 PM
Great metaphoric write..Very descriptive. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/3/2010 5:32:00 PM
LOVE IT. Praise to nature! LUv, andrea
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