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Nature's Rice Krisipies

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Inspired by a wonderful comment from poetess, Sandra Adams, to my poem, 'Twirling Leaves,' posted on October 11, 2019...

nature's rice krispies kindling wood on the fireplace ~ snap, crackle and pop!

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/13/2019 1:19:00 PM

Gershon, I love this fireside chat. Very nice Haiku. A note about the great cereal: In 1928 Kellogg’s Rice Krispies Cereal first appears on store shelves. Snap! Crackle! Pop! appeared in 1929. Knap! Knaetter! Knak! in South Africa. Piff! Paff! Puff! in Norway. Have a nice day. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2019 1:58:00 PM

Hey! This is some great info I never would have imagined without your comment, Richard. Really appreciate all of this info, especially that Knap! Knaetter! Knak! in S. Africa. Great stuff!! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/13/2019 6:12:00 AM

Oh I like it! :-) x

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know, Elaine. :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2019 5:40:00 AM

This is great! The title drew me in and the poem is perfect. It is nice being in front of the woodstove :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2019 11:02:00 AM

Heidi. Thanks for letting me know how you liked the haiku and what you liked about it. Much appreciated. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2019 5:07:00 AM

Wonderfully cute, my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2019 11:01:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much! ~ POP!

Mark Toney

Date: 10/12/2019 11:55:00 PM

I not only can hear the snap, crackle and pop, but I can see the fire dancing after springing to life and can smell that wonderful burning wood. Thanks for the moment, Gershon. I can't wait until we get some fireplace weather :) ~Mark

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2019 11:01:00 AM

Thanks for such an expressive, detailed-descriptive comment, Mark. I really appreciate this kind of feedback!! :) :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/12/2019 10:03:00 PM

I love this one...so few words, yet it comes to life beautifully... great penning my friend, glad i could help inspire your pen ...lovely haiku :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/12/2019 10:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra... You definitely gave me the idea for this one, which just wrote itself upon reading your delightful comment. Thanks again! :) gw