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Inspired by a wonderful comment from poetess, Sandra Adams, to my poem, 'Twirling Leaves,' posted on October 11, 2019...

Nature's Rice Krisipies

nature's rice krispies

   kindling wood on the fireplace
 
     ~ snap, crackle and pop!

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Quoth Theraven

October 13, 2019 at 1:19 PM

Gershon, I love this fireside chat. Very nice Haiku. A note about the great cereal: In 1928 Kellogg’s Rice Krispies Cereal first appears on store shelves. Snap! Crackle! Pop! appeared in 1929. Knap! Knaetter! Knak! in South Africa. Piff! Paff! Puff! in Norway. Have a nice day. -Richard

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2019 at 1:58 PM

Hey! This is some great info I never would have imagined without your comment, Richard. Really appreciate all of this info, especially that Knap! Knaetter! Knak! in S. Africa. Great stuff!! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Elaine Perrin

October 13, 2019 at 6:12 AM

Oh I like it! :-) x

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2019 at 11:02 AM

Thanks for letting me know, Elaine. :) gw

Heidi Sands

October 13, 2019 at 5:40 AM

This is great! The title drew me in and the poem is perfect. It is nice being in front of the woodstove :)

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2019 at 11:02 AM

Heidi. Thanks for letting me know how you liked the haiku and what you liked about it. Much appreciated. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

October 13, 2019 at 5:07 AM

Wonderfully cute, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2019 at 11:01 AM

Kim, thank you so much! ~ POP!

Mark Toney

October 12, 2019 at 11:55 PM

I not only can hear the snap, crackle and pop, but I can see the fire dancing after springing to life and can smell that wonderful burning wood. Thanks for the moment, Gershon. I can't wait until we get some fireplace weather :) ~Mark

Gershon Wolf

October 13, 2019 at 11:01 AM

Thanks for such an expressive, detailed-descriptive comment, Mark. I really appreciate this kind of feedback!! :) :) gw

Sandra Adams

October 12, 2019 at 10:03 PM

I love this one...so few words, yet it comes to life beautifully... great penning my friend, glad i could help inspire your pen ...lovely haiku :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

October 12, 2019 at 10:20 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra... You definitely gave me the idea for this one, which just wrote itself upon reading your delightful comment. Thanks again! :) gw

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