Nature's Rhythm

tantalizing Tulips announced their delightful arrival soon, magnificent world waking up after a frosty winter dream tiny buds glistening gleefully on dancing rose branches, invite for a pleasant stroll on tender glossy grass gleam ~ Bluebells and Daffodils create colourful fresco of flowers Hyacinth, Crocuses glow joyfully in shower of sunshine, lustrous leaves fantasy of an enchanting enticing summer... birds ecstatic chirp melodious rhapsody symphonic divine ~ gorgeous Spring embarking with a jubilant triumphant pace, chilly winter leaves with harsh biting wind and shimmering snow, flirting around butterflies kiss the dainty softest petals ... from my window I watch harmonious Nature's magical show ~ May 5, 2022 Spring Rhyme - 8 to 12 lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/15/2022 9:13:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on this win. A wonderful write. I love Spring. Have a great/blessed~day/week..................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2022 1:17:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderfully penned Spring poem!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/12/2022 2:05:00 PM

Your "Nature's Rhythm" is a wonderful write. Spring is a great time of the year. Have a great/blessed day..................

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/6/2022 5:39:00 AM

A gorgeous rendition of Spring's sublimest beauty. Well-done dear Mala...A fave for me.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/6/2022 6:10:00 AM

Thank you, Dear JCB. Your fave! so honoured! Glad you enjoyed.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2022 3:19:00 PM

Hello Mala, yes nature does really put on a show. In the early morning the birds sing their songs. A nice way to wake up. Love & Friendship , Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2022 10:30:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes Spring is here for you and me to enjoy. I enjoy nature's bounty. Love & Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/5/2022 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, Dear Darlene. I know how much you enjoy Nature's bounty - Spring is at last here for you and me!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/5/2022 8:17:00 AM

Mala, this is such a beautiful picture of spring. So upbeat and mood-changing! I love it.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/5/2022 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Milton. Really appreciate your visit and delightful comments.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/5/2022 7:20:00 AM

I love this Mala . Such a grand display of the birth of Spring .What a joy to behold ! When life is renewed and promises are born . Nature’s magical show is one not to be missed ! I love your last line … gazing out your window . All best wishes for the contest. Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/5/2022 3:32:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. True - what a joy to experience the renewal and promises of a magical season!