Natures Pause

The world is standing still holding it's breath
one moment frozen in time
the calm before the storm

Kimo Contest
First attempt at this form
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/2/2013 2:10:00 AM
I like your poem. I also want to thank you for your smart and funny comments about my cat-poem. Please, get a cat!
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Date: 2/1/2013 11:55:00 AM
You did very well for your first attempt with this form! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon! You have written a delightful piece! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/1/2013 10:19:00 AM
i also agree the calm before the storm,, in all aspects on the planet these days... i like your Kimo,,Richard..
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:32:00 AM
I love this because for me it's very true. I see it as the stage of the world and I have felt this frozen moment ever since 9/11.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2013 8:36:00 AM
Good morning, thanks for commenting.
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