Natures Pace

And golden ears of corn stretched to listen, to the suns 
warming ray of words, as stems swayed and rattled. In 
the next field yellow Sunflowers genuflected, lifted 
their heads to their heavenly maker, turning not to lose 
his eye. And the sun beat of an egg blue sky, a blanket 
of  life  for all to nestle. Only song rained, spilling from 
the throats of lofty Skylarks sharing their delight on this 
miracle of days. Hawthorne, Bramble and Blackberry 
wrestled creating a thorn haven for Blackbird and Thrush 
as they cared for the young ever gaping mouths. Bumble 
bees and Hover flies darted flower heads, intoxicated on 
the abundance of rich pollen, the flower kissed and life is 
granted. The fruits ripen, Field mice nibble the sweet corn's
tender pods, and the Buzzard glides softly with searching 
eye. This day takes place with no rush or haste, no agenda 
to adhere to, just to amble at natures pace. And on I walk
forever lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/17/2010 7:17:00 AM
a lovely lovely discriptive write! Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2010 1:15:00 PM
To be lost here would be paradise...lovely piece....Allie
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Date: 4/22/2010 8:20:00 AM
Lovely visuals Daniel and a painting in words ...so enjoyed your creative write tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:32:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Too bad a person feels lost in this splendor. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:36:00 AM
I'd love to get lost in this beauty...Serene indeed..I wonder if youlive in a place where you are surrounded by nature away from the buzzling and noise of the Cities,cos you write so beautifully...Charma
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:28:00 AM
Sounds like a walk of peace ...Great descriptiveness and expressiveness in this one..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2010 1:31:00 PM
Very nice ! Thanks
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:42:00 PM
that was lovely
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:43:00 AM
A real good write I can relate to the lost part. Thank you .
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