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Natures Music

birds on power lines
music written on the sky
God’s own manuscript
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hicks Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 8:56 PM
This one is really cool, Suz. Clever visual with the birds being the notes on the scale. Normally, I think photos with haiku are a bit distracting, but in this they definitely compliment each other.
Horne Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 12:45 PM
oh, this is excellent
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 2:37 AM
Beautiful and creative, Suz...and the accompanying visual is superb! ~ Warm regards // paul
Leffanta Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:57 AM
Starling heaven ....Aloha! Rico
Delaney Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:00 AM
Aloha to you, too,Rico. Thanks for stopping by. SuZ
One Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Music written on the sky... nice one.. I like this one..
Delaney Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 4:46 AM
Thanks, Silent One. Have a wonderful day. SuZ
Cunningham Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 1:03 AM
Love this Suz, im humming the tune lol. Tom
Delaney Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 4:45 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Tom. So far so good for awakening my. muse. SuZ
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November 16, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Very nice, Suzanne!
Delaney Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 4:40 AM
Thanks Kim:)
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