Nature's Mosaic

Minute tears from leaves
Full pristine essence of spice
             Revitalizing

      Birds and butterflies
Thriving hops - wiggles of life
 Spring then grow outburst

   Swish from crystal falls 
Exquisite rumbling of charm
       Serene symphonic

    Lair of jam-pack blooms
    Prismatic crowning glory
          Nature's mosaic


(c) Olive Eloisa
MAy 13, 2014
6:51 pm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcintosh Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 7:33 AM
I like this. Happy writing. God bless you.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Thank you so much and your too. :D)
A  Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 8:42 AM
sweet win Olive....SKAT
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so much Skat..:) beauty
A. Sharma Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Beautiful haikus Olive ! much said in few words is just great ,, n so is ur win ! congrats !
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Thanks much Dr.. I'm so glad for your visIts..:)
May Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Congrats on your win Olive
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Thanks much Joseph May
A   Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 10:10 AM
Olive, ..Congratulations, <3 Enjoy my newest blog, if you like. :) I appreciate the support. Thank you--- xox~ LINDA
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:36 AM
thanks much.. :)
Sirak Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 5:24 AM
What a beautiful mosaic you have pieced together with your wonderful words.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:36 AM
thanks much Monterey .. :)
Dom Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 7:30 AM
you sure 'jam-pack' the diction in this series of haiku, olive. I can almost see the begininings of renga.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:35 AM
aha thanks much Michael I appreciate your drop by.. :D
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Well, well, well !!! Olive_eloi is blossoming at a fast rate! Spring has brought freshness and vigour! gl // paul
Callus Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 10:04 AM
congrats on honourable glory:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Loools beating the time that's how we are ... Loools
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Oh! that is a pity...sorry for you. I was going to enter that one; now it's too late for me too!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 2:58 PM
PAul this actually a late one.. :D when i typed it and submit and try to find the contest it khalas na.. :D it's a late write.. :P
Onclaud Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 11:45 AM
you made this string of ku fly way out of the gate, olive.. stunning.. huggs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Thanks much Nette..:)gBU
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