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Nature's Mosaic

Minute tears from leaves Full pristine essence of spice Revitalizing Birds and butterflies Thriving hops - wiggles of life Spring then grow outburst Swish from crystal falls Exquisite rumbling of charm Serene symphonic Lair of jam-pack blooms Prismatic crowning glory Nature's mosaic (c) Olive Eloisa MAy 13, 2014 6:51 pm

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Date: 7/14/2014 7:33:00 AM
I like this. Happy writing. God bless you.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much and your too. :D)
Date: 5/24/2014 8:42:00 AM
sweet win Olive....SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2014 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat..:) beauty
Date: 5/18/2014 11:01:00 PM
Beautiful haikus Olive ! much said in few words is just great ,, n so is ur win ! congrats !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2014 11:24:00 AM
Thanks much Dr.. I'm so glad for your visIts..:)
Date: 5/18/2014 5:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thanks much Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2014 10:10:00 AM
Olive, ..Congratulations, <3 Enjoy my newest blog, if you like. :) I appreciate the support. Thank you--- xox~ LINDA
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 5:36:00 AM
thanks much.. :)
Date: 5/15/2014 5:24:00 AM
What a beautiful mosaic you have pieced together with your wonderful words.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 5:36:00 AM
thanks much Monterey .. :)
Date: 5/14/2014 7:30:00 AM
you sure 'jam-pack' the diction in this series of haiku, olive. I can almost see the begininings of renga.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 5:35:00 AM
aha thanks much Michael I appreciate your drop by.. :D
Date: 5/13/2014 2:52:00 PM
Well, well, well !!! Olive_eloi is blossoming at a fast rate! Spring has brought freshness and vigour! gl // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
congrats on honourable glory:)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/13/2014 5:33:00 PM
Loools beating the time that's how we are ... Loools
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2014 3:24:00 PM
Oh! that is a pity...sorry for you. I was going to enter that one; now it's too late for me too!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/13/2014 2:58:00 PM
PAul this actually a late one.. :D when i typed it and submit and try to find the contest it khalas na.. :D it's a late write.. :P
Date: 5/13/2014 11:45:00 AM
you made this string of ku fly way out of the gate, olive.. stunning.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/13/2014 5:34:00 PM
Thanks much Nette..:)gBU

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