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Natures Mining

Busy bees humming
On wisteria flowers
In gold nature gives

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Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2025 at 2:49 PM

Congrats in Brian's contest

Emilia James

July 3, 2025 at 9:47 AM

Thank alot Andrea : )

John Gondolf

August 24, 2021 at 2:36 AM

Nicely written haiku, Emilia, I can almost smell the scent is wisteria in the air. Hugs, John

Emilia James

August 24, 2021 at 4:04 AM

Thank you John, still don't fully understand how to write this form hence not wrote one since, might give it another try. Hugs, Emilia : )

James Inman

August 29, 2020 at 6:39 AM

Almost perfect Haiku! Very well done. Nature theme, setting the season with the wisteria blooming, correct syllable count and a wonderful twist with your last line. Impressive, Emilia!

Emilia James

September 1, 2020 at 8:47 AM

Thank you James, this is my first attempt at Haiku and was not sure if what I wrote was right in any way at all. I am very happy with almost perfect, thank you again. Emilia : )