Natures Mining

Busy bees humming On wisteria flowers In gold nature gives

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John Gondolf

Date: 8/24/2021 2:36:00 AM

Nicely written haiku, Emilia, I can almost smell the scent is wisteria in the air. Hugs, John

Emilia James
Date: 8/24/2021 4:04:00 AM

Thank you John, still don't fully understand how to write this form hence not wrote one since, might give it another try. Hugs, Emilia : )

James Inman

Date: 8/29/2020 6:39:00 AM

Almost perfect Haiku! Very well done. Nature theme, setting the season with the wisteria blooming, correct syllable count and a wonderful twist with your last line. Impressive, Emilia!

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you James, this is my first attempt at Haiku and was not sure if what I wrote was right in any way at all. I am very happy with almost perfect, thank you again. Emilia : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 1:17:00 PM

What lovely imagery Emilia!

Emilia James
Date: 9/1/2020 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Caren : )