Heidi Sands Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Nature's Messages

*A painting of Mt. Chocorua in New Hampshire.  I don't know why it is blurry, when uploaded....



The comfort of mountains, peaceful water at twilight
Brings resolution to the end of the day
The clouds pile up and have their final say
Powerful language in sky before night

Calm water welcomes the messages sent
The glimmer of sun says goodbye for now
Nature has a way of speaking somehow
As we listen, cherishing time spent

Our feelings can be altered, just by sight
Watching the colorful changes take place
Once it is dark, they’ll be without a trace
Until we wake in the face of daylight

This creation of movement and stillness too
Sounds breaking quietness can lead the way
There are so many scenes within a day
To bring the gift of smiles when feeling blue

Heidi Sands

6/5/21

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Edward Ibeh June 6, 2021 at 7:31 AM Absolutely fantastic piece with incredible imagery, Heidi:-) Hope you're having a wonderful weekend! Heidi Sands June 6, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thank you very much Edward. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Quoth Theraven June 5, 2021 at 8:38 PM Heidi, Finest portrait painted in your message. 'The glimmer of sun says goodbye for now' All best plans made, a wish for you. -Richard Heidi Sands June 6, 2021 at 4:42 AM Thank you Richard. It was a sight nearby, I painted recently. Thank you for the kind message. I hope you have a happy Sunday :)

Joseph May June 5, 2021 at 4:58 PM The language of the sky can change moods, love the painting, hugs Heidi Sands June 5, 2021 at 6:41 PM Yes. Thank you Joseph hugs . :)

Vijay Pandit June 5, 2021 at 2:37 PM Nature does speak both in your painting and in your poem, Heidi. Splendid hues you created in enclosed rhymes. Heidi Sands June 5, 2021 at 2:40 PM Thank you Vijay. I don't know why the photo turns out blurry when I upload it. I left it there anyway ...lol. I hope you have a nice evening :)