Nature's Law

Charcoal dark, gimlet sharp eyes observing, searching. Lake below, surface calm, Tiny ripple, silver flash, Extended talons swooping down. Prey ensnared, life expired, Soaring upward, eagle wings. Rugged mountain nest on high, Ravenous young, sumptuous bounty, Shimmering scattered silver scales. A testament to Nature’s glory, Nature’s cruelty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Toney Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Margaret, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (9). Excellent use of descriptive words; I could visually see the drama unfold.
mysore Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 4:30 AM
Beautifully written dear poet, so very well said 'A testament to/ Nature’s glory,/Nature’s cruelty.' Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Margaret, I am still waiting for you to come back, you sweet sonnet lady. I hope you are ok!
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November 25, 2010 at 10:24 PM
Hey, you came back!!! Please let me know what you have been up to in a soupmail or something. LUv ya, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 11:06 PM
YOu are such a fine writer, Margaret, Where are you?? I miss you! Luv,Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Nature's way, but hard to view. A great write with outstanding imagery. Mahalo, Connie
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June 27, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Nature's law is cruel sometimes...well penned...Kisses, Emily
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