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(To be sung to the tune of the Christmas Carol - “Away in a Manger”)
Nature’s Language of Love
The landscapes are glowing when the world awakes And earth smells aromatic as the dawn breaks Then when day is done and the dark night has come That’s when scenic mystic magic is begun. Nature converses in her language of love Through wonders created by God up above She is a composer of melodies too Look and listen to the things nature can do. Proudly elegant, beauteous stately trees The leaves on the boughs sing their songs on the breeze Trees provide feasts from the fruit of the harvest And shelter from storms when one’s at their darkest. The water we need, the air that we all breathe Humans, animals, birds, butterflies and bees Without nature nothing could ever exist The earth would be barren, what we’d have all missed. Grant thanks to our Father in heaven above For gifts of nature that come wrapped up in love The life that we have, the miracle of birth Rising of the sun, moon and stars o’er the earth. An emblem of love is nature’s fragrant rose Warming hearts with her charm where’re a rose grows.
6th October 2021 * * * * * * * * Change The Record Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg

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Date: 11/18/2021 2:07:00 PM
You chose a wonderful carol and your words fit so perfectly with the tune many congrats on your win Belle:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2021 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So Very Beautiful. Have a blessed day.................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/13/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Have a blessed day too… Belle
Date: 11/12/2021 12:00:00 PM
Hello Belle, this is such a beautiful song. A very clever use of a popular tune. A lovely rhythm and perfect sync with the tune. Thank you for entering and huge congrats on your placement in the contest. :-D
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 5:46:00 PM
Hi Natasha, I’m delighted to have received a placement in the contest, I enjoyed the challenge very much. Thank you! Belle
Date: 10/14/2021 10:00:00 PM
A stupendous write Belle, you describe nature and its beauties with skill and poetic talent and thus you create a vivid picture in the readers mind and the tune picked encompasses your poem in serenity and tranquility. Love you my friend, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, I’m moved by your comments they mean so much. Love you too dear friend… Belle
Date: 10/11/2021 7:38:00 PM
Hello Belle ... just beautiful, positive, and harmonious set of lyrics. If only this world could all be as peaceful as your poem describes it would truly be paradise - thank you Belle - Lindsay
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2021 2:32:00 PM
I agree, if only the world could find peace. Thank you Lindsay, so pleased with your positive comments on this poem… Belle
Date: 10/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
This is a beautiful, special poem. I love it. A Fave for me :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2021 1:12:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much, those words mean a lot… Belle :-)
Date: 10/8/2021 4:59:00 AM
WoW! Belle, What a good entry for the contest theme. Your lyrics are a wonderful ode to mother nature. They fit into the tune of the song you chose perfectly. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2021 7:20:00 AM
Alexis thank you so much for your generous comments and good wishes for the contest… Belle :-)
Date: 10/6/2021 8:44:00 AM
Belle, your portrayal of nature is stunning. You've chosen one of the most beautiful tunes and created a great lyric to go with it. I hope you do well in the contest, and I wish you luck.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/6/2021 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Lasaad, your words fill my heart with joy. Bless you… Belle
Date: 10/6/2021 2:16:00 AM
You captured nature well in your version Belle, A well composed lyric. Good luck in the contest and hope your week is going well. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/6/2021 5:25:00 AM
Thank you Tom, had a lovely few days with my niece and her husband in Brixham, Devon, back and all’s well, hope it is the same for you too… Belle
Date: 10/6/2021 1:29:00 AM
You chose one of the most beautiful carols and you poem is great. Best fir a win.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/6/2021 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor, that Carol has always been a favourite of mine and I hope this lyrical poem goes well with the tune… Belle

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