Nature's Hotel

Grandeur of green rooms
...lobby of solar water;
elevator streams.

7-2-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Creative work..Enjoyed reading...Congrats..Sara
Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:18 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ...so happy to share the 8th place with you...*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Congrats Johnny on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations on your win Johnny in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:14 AM
A completely different approach here..beautiful Haiku.congrats on your win.
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Johnny, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:18 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Johnny
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Many congrats, Johnny: )
Leyva Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM
SHORT BUT NICE.. GOOD JOB JOHNNY..
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 2:28 PM
that is really cool how you made it all like a hotel, johnny. That's thinking outside the box for sure! Good luck if this is for that one contest. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 12:19 PM
perfection Johnny with these levels of Haiku ..good luck in the contest.. great references with earthy things parallel to nature ..oh..happy 4th..
Maverick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:40 AM
A livley enough piece Johnny, & enjoyed reading..
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