Nature's Harakiri

Crossroads without roads
Bonsai trees slapped  by sandstorms
Kites slam in rice fields
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 10:57 PM
wow, you really painted it with words, Iolanda!!!
Pickett Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 9:44 AM
I love the images you have painted in this Haiku.....:JP]
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Apt use of the word Harakiri with fitting images
Sweetheart Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Lovely Iolanda .. and Bonsai Trees are so gorgeous and special .. and expensive too but so lovely like yur words..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
Pickett Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 6:38 PM
Creative this Haiku... Wonderful my friend....:JP}
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