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Nature's Harakiri

Crossroads without roads Bonsai trees slapped by sandstorms Kites slam in rice fields

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 10:57:00 PM
wow, you really painted it with words, Iolanda!!!
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:44:00 AM
I love the images you have painted in this Haiku.....:JP]
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Date: 6/2/2010 9:04:00 PM
Apt use of the word Harakiri with fitting images
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:07:00 PM
Lovely Iolanda .. and Bonsai Trees are so gorgeous and special .. and expensive too but so lovely like yur words..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:38:00 PM
Creative this Haiku... Wonderful my friend....:JP}
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