Nature's Haiku

NATURE’S   HAIKU



Growing  together

Water  stone mould each other

Contained container 


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Written  for  John Freeman’s  Contest   “The Precept: Nature's Haiku”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work..Congrats...Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:34 PM
you winged it, syd.. good you copied my phrases ( kidding).. precise beauty this one! congrats on your super win! :) huggs
Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:14 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on the 7th place win..*-*junjun
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your win Syd in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Congrats Sydney on your win ..enjoyed your Haiku.
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Sydney, Congratulations on your poem's success and thanks for your support of this effort. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:16 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Sydney
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, Sydney. It is so nice to hear from you at the end of this lovely holiday week!
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:52 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Syd. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Lovely images creating a fine visual, Sydney
Beck Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:54 PM
thanks Dr Ram
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:40 PM
Simply said....beautifully written. :)
Beck Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:54 PM
thank you Carrie
Amadore Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Very nice haiku...
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