S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Verse

Nature's Fury-2

Nature’s fury

a)	Tsunami

Synonym of death
Tsunami
In sea’s lexicon.

Form: LUNE (5-3-5,unrhymed)

b)	Thunderbolt

Sparkler in sky
Lovely. But, is it for a bad
Cracker close by.

Form: Trillinea O (4-8-4, L1&L3 rhymed)

c)	Crimson Light
           
Fire or brimstone burning? The smile of whore
Or hell’s ire? Dusk or night, is it bloody
The last?
            
 Form: Dixdeux O (10-10-2 )

             PS: Based on the three given pics.
             S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 10 Jun 2013.
             For Debbie’s contest.

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 12, 2013 at 1:06 PM very clever Jag xx

Nette Onclaud June 12, 2013 at 12:19 PM yes to your win, jag.. congrats!.:) huggs

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2013 at 7:10 PM Colorful writing, showing a great desire to grow, the punctuation and capitalization bothered me, and is not current. The Trillinea required the use of the word ROSE. Keep up the good work! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Tim Ryerson June 11, 2013 at 5:39 PM EXTREMELY well written in very challenging and difficult forms, Jag...Liked the Dixdeux particularly...Congratulations - Tim

Nette Onclaud June 11, 2013 at 11:45 AM an explosive piece so well scribed, jag... love the last verse; it completes the whole picture with a whip!..:) all the best, my friend..:) huggs

Charlotte Puddifoot June 10, 2013 at 4:51 PM intriguing trio of poems you have here jaggy, unusual wording, I like them a lot (especially the first one) they should do well in debbie's contest :)

Terry O'Leary June 10, 2013 at 2:58 PM Splendid combination... good luck in the contest... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2013 at 10:08 AM - Proficient and well written Jag. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)