Natures Eyes

Waterfalls flowing seeing things in a new light natures eyes don't lie.
precept haiku contest
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Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Creative work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:34 PM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award,cory!! :) huggs
Villanueva Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:15 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on the 7th place win! *_*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:41 PM
congrats cory on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty buddy ...luv..
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win Cory in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Wonderful approach...congrats on your win Cory.
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Cory, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:17 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, cory
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Many congrats, Cory : )
Anish Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Nice haiku - I noticed you stuck to the 5 7 5 form. Keep up the good work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 11:22 PM
this is a lovely one and I like that you used nature mixed with a precept!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 10:29 AM
so true cory ..wonderful words emote precious feelings from the beautiful photo..good luck in the contest my friend..and happy 4th luv..
Foulk Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:12 PM
a beautiful well written Haiku. thank you for commenting on The Silence of a Falling Star.
Falotico Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:26 AM
So true are your words in this lovely peacful write....enjoyed your vision... soupmail 4 u......always Michael
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:19 PM
Lovely precept this is!!! (and true!)
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 5:57 PM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by and giving my work a kind review..Sara
Butterfly Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Remarkable piece Cory, Good luck in the contest... ~Randa
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