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Natures Embrace

I embrace the earth & all her kisses for I feed off her affection Her depth is a mirror of the abyss & she takes me in deep for self-reflection It's our obsession with one another that brings peace to eternal souls Together we make sense of a world in pieces as everything flows when we are whole Losing my way wasn't the goal but it led to me being found When we're together we move in silence but the waves we make are really loud The sound of our love is music to my ears as we make each other sing This is my note for a lovely lyric that makes musicals of things

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Date: 11/7/2023 3:45:00 PM
What a delightfully, well written poem Jasen. Love the title. Great, poetic lines,’ Her depth is a mirror of the abyss ‘ ‘ everything flows when we are whole’. Vey profound. Love the last two lines especially. A pleasure reading this fine poem. Keep on posting. Blessings and smiles to you :):)
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 11/8/2023 4:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Christina for your support and feedback it's always great to hear from you. Blessings and smiles to you as well and good day to you!!
Date: 10/30/2023 9:36:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 10/30/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette!! Many blessings to you

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