Nature's Door

When things round, go wrong,
I step into my favourite place,
where people usually don't throng,
when things round go wrong;
I go to the place I belong
where I have friends to embrace
when things round go wrong
I step into my favourite place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Hello Supraja Kannaan, yes I do agree that nature's door is the best place to be for inspiration fo creating poetry. have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 1:30 PM
I like this, Supraja. I don't dare look at your other two triolet, thinking one of them is for my contest, but I hope you are using 8 syllable lines in your other ones.
Kannan Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Yes. It is for your contest, Andrea. Both are the same. It did enter twice. I was wondering about that. But I am afraid to delete one of the entries as I don't know which one was entered in the contest.... Wait wait...8 syllables per line??? I will check it out. Thanks for letting me know, Andrea.
Pandit Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Nature is your favorite place..you captured the serenity of the place where you belong..all the best, Supraja.
Kannan Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Glad you liked it.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Delightful concept, uplifting message dear, Supraja!
Kannan Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios. Glad you liked it.
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