Aditi Mishra Poet Rhyme

Nature's Dance

Blue robin in garden sings a soothing song,
  dew drops dance in rings blushing all along,
    skew golden rays of strings covering a furlong,
      new dawn of rebirth brings summer here daylong.
        Few butterflies sprout wings to fly lifelong,
          strew colors on rushing springs where they belong;
            queue of red ants clings to branches too strong,
              view to a world of little kings all dressed wrong.


June 30, 2020

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Sandra Adams July 2, 2020 at 6:23 AM such beautiful imagery... you handled the challenge well...I often struggle with rhyme and your piece made it look so easy, it flows wonderfully... Aditi Mishra July 4, 2020 at 2:31 PM Your words are really encouraging Sandra. Though I know you will pen something beautiful. Blessings and love :)

Caren Krutsinger July 2, 2020 at 3:00 AM Gorgeously done; I would have probably typed this one monorhyme, but it is a rhyme, just a step further than most. Aditi Mishra July 4, 2020 at 2:30 PM Thank you for such encouraging words Caren. You are a brilliant poetess and I am sure monorhyme will come out wonderfully. Blessings and love :)

John Watt July 2, 2020 at 2:36 AM I tried this one out and it's super hard. You chose your rhyming words well, to give you many options, but you wove it together to sound very natural in your description of the fauna around you. Well done, friend! Aditi Mishra July 4, 2020 at 2:29 PM Thank you for such uplifting words dear friend. I am sure you will pen a beautiful verse for this contest. God bless you :)

Jenish Somadas July 1, 2020 at 2:01 AM Wow.. mesmerizing imagery.. What a lovely write.. Good luck.. Aditi Mishra July 1, 2020 at 7:57 AM Glad you love my words Jenish. Thanks for visiting and appreciating. :)