Natures Cryptic Message

Natures cryptic message

Thunder may clap loud, this is not applause 
for disastrous acts that we humans cause,
lightning illuminates clouds, forks and strikes
expressing nature's disgust and dislikes,
wind may whistle, but not a happy tune
reminds nature's wrath we're never immune,
winters virgin snow may fall pure cold white
accept her message, we can't be contrite,
life giving rain, though she doesn't guarantee 
or promise every year our necessity,
she may be cruel or may be gentle 
she creates on earth, our heaven and hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Interesting , well written poem Roy :)
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Heidi, I think if we look after the planet nature will be kind to us, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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March 1, 2018 at 7:33 AM
- True, Roy - Nobody knows tomorrow - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Anne-Lise, I think nature is in control of us and will punish us for our wrong doing, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
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March 1, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Fantastic pen Roy!! :) xomo
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so much Maureen, when I get a fantastic it certainly makes my day, thanks. :))
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Your poem is a great message on nature's disgust..humans must heed! Well written, Roy!
Pett Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Vijay, Sooner or later we will need to make the right decision if we are to survive, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))
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