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Nature's Couplets

The birdsong in the morning is so clear It is a song I love to hear As the moonbeams kissed the sea That is where I like to be The winding river flows it's course Using mother nature's force The heat is here, it is so strong While the Eastern winds they sing their song

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 6:43:00 AM

to go natural is to be natural. i love this piece of writing specially because it is hard to find natural things eg , milk is powdered, or made from chemicals not real cow or animal milk............so is the case with everything

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/15/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thanks vera , i like all allowed foods, we have a spacious house with a garden as well. It is airy and nice

Vera Duggan
Date: 3/6/2018 11:28:00 PM

Thank you Muhammed, We try to be as natural as we can, we even try not to eat too much meat, my husband has gone vegitarian, I am trying but I find it very hard, but I do my best and we also love the wide open spaces, take care.......Vera

Cheryl Koko Koomoa

Date: 6/3/2016 8:15:00 AM

Sweet Couplets:)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/28/2016 9:41:00 PM

Lovely nature couplets, Vera: Very soothing to meditate on the beauty around us. Thanks for sharing. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:55:00 PM

vera, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/27/2016 11:07:00 PM

Linda thank you ever so much for your lovely comment on my nature couplets, you are too kind, hope you are well, take care.....Vera

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 PM

vera, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 PM

vera, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/17/2016 9:01:00 AM

Very beautifully written couplets . Do not worry about its brevity, as it presents a love of Nature and of life big enough to be felt when reading. And that makes it a truly great write! A7

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/26/2016 10:19:00 PM

Robert my friend, thank you so much for this lovely comment, hope you and the family are well, take care....Vera

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/14/2016 7:15:00 AM

A pretty one! Nicely expressed Vera.

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/15/2016 6:50:00 PM

Richard my friend thank you so much for taking the time to read this couplet, hope you and family are well, take care..............Vera

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/12/2016 4:46:00 AM

Happy to read you again, Vera. Did you het my Soupmail before? hugs!

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/13/2016 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading Kim, Soup Mail...Take care...Vera

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 1/10/2016 4:48:00 PM

I enjoyed this so much, I wished it was longer

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/13/2016 1:58:00 AM

Hi Jerry I was going to make it longer but I couldn't think of anything to write, maybe next time, thank you so much for reading it and I hope you had a happy Christmas and new year, take care.....Vera

Eve Roper

Date: 12/31/2015 9:25:00 AM

Mother nature is so wonderful to us sharing everything <3 Wonderful poem, Vera. Hugs dear friend sure enjoy your visits

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2015 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, just thought I would try writing couplets, they are quite easy, I am not really a poet but now and then I like to try my hand at anything, you name it and I will try it. Take care my dear friend................Vera