Nature's Cheerleaders

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NATURE’S CHEERLEADERS P~erennial pops, flower balls O~f delectable colors. M~ums amazing appeal red chrysanthemums like a rubefacient kiss passion enfolds thee misty lemon mum is watered with my sorrow clings to yesterday white wears faithfulness and beautiful as a bride snow clings to husband P~etals, appear as pompoms O~f nature’s cheerleaders. M~omentous hallelujah for God. 8/8/2017 Combo Acrostic/haiku

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Dean Wood

Date: 8/10/2017 11:22:00 AM

You are so creative Kim. Wonderful poem. I saw giant mums at a festival in Japan the size of large grapefruits. Just as you described them. Nice little senryu tucked in the middle there also. I learned what rubefacient means too. Thanks! -- Dean

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2017 12:38:00 PM

I just saw some beautiful Mums in Minneapolis - Como Park Town. Just so beautiful!