Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Nature's Breast

The sunshine climbs up the rooted ladder smelling the midsummer umber sentinels, that stand tunnel watch over later comers
shushing the interrupted lull wild that have succumbed to slumber.
Scented mumbling of dawn's spiral seraph rose pink of light lumbers.

6/7/2018

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Susan Gentry June 18, 2018 at 11:20 PM Congratulations on your top win. Well written with awesome imagery and excellent rhyme.

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2018 at 10:14 AM This is exactly the kind of poem Silent ONe enjoys, so I can see how it placed high. I love the use of alliteration for your beautiful imagery. Congrats on win.

Paul Callus June 15, 2018 at 1:56 AM Sensual imagery, rhyme and a sprinkling of alliteration are the main ingredients of this beautiful poem, Eve. Congratulations on placing first!! Hugs // paul

Janice Canerdy June 14, 2018 at 9:43 PM Congratulations on your win, Eve! Janice

Edward Ibeh June 13, 2018 at 12:53 PM Wonderful write, Eve!:-) Congratulations on your win! Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:30 PM Thank you, Edward...Hugs Eve ~’*

Gershon Wolf June 13, 2018 at 10:24 AM "...rose pink of light lumbers." This phrase and so many others constitute innovative, imaginative imagery, so richly deserving of a first-place trophy. Congrats, Eve! :) gw Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:29 PM Thank you, Gershon, for such inspiring visit..Hugs Eve ~’*

Roy Pett June 13, 2018 at 10:12 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, beautiful poetry, so well written. :)) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:28 PM Thank you, Roy..Hugs Eve ~’*

Mick Talbot June 13, 2018 at 9:59 AM A treasure, every word, nature personified, rose pink, the light you've shone, a radiance you've shared in your poem. Congratulations on your win Eve. Mick Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:28 PM Thank you, Mick, you are so very kind.Hugs Eve ~’*

Natasha Turner June 13, 2018 at 7:40 AM Wow..so mystical and beautiful. Well done dear :) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:28 PM Thank you, Natasha for the kind words....Hugs Eve ~’*

Fauxcroft Wade June 13, 2018 at 7:35 AM Great piece congrats on your win. Faux Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Faux..Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 7:25 AM Congratulations for your 1st place win Eve :) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Heidi for the congratulations and your return visit....Hugs Eve ~’*

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 7:15 AM - Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:26 PM Thank you, Sunshine....Hugs Eve ~’*

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2018 at 7:09 AM Congratulations Eve. Tom. Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:26 PM Thank you, Tom ..Hugs Eve ~’*

John Gondolf June 13, 2018 at 7:02 AM You paint a very lovely picture with your words, Eve, congrats on your well deserved win. John Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:25 PM Thank you, John, for your kind words..Hugs Eve ~’*

Silent One June 13, 2018 at 6:55 AM Four excellent poetic lines with awesome imagery and of course great rhyme Eve.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:25 PM Thank you, Silent One for my win....Hugs Eve ~’*

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2018 at 5:36 PM very inventive, Eve. I love the many textures of this one. This is not judged yet, is it? I wonder why!! Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:24 PM Thank you, Andrea...Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands June 12, 2018 at 6:01 AM Beautiful Eve. I enjoyed this! Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:24 PM Thank you, Heidi....Hugs Eve ~’*

Connie Marcum Wong June 9, 2018 at 9:04 PM This is very lovely Eve. I can almost smell the scent of the trees! : ) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:22 PM Thank you, Connie,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Pashang Salehi June 9, 2018 at 1:56 PM Nicely done... Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:22 PM Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:21 PM Thank you, Pashang,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Ralph Sergi June 8, 2018 at 5:29 PM You met the challenge well, Eve. Each natural word blending into a poetic elixir! Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:20 PM Thank you, Ralph,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Nette Onclaud June 8, 2018 at 1:43 PM ohh, vivid display of imagery, eve... your artistry shines..huggs Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:20 PM Thank you, Nette,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Faraz Ajmal June 8, 2018 at 5:18 AM It s a a really deep and lovely poem, good luck in the contest Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:20 PM Thank you, Faraz,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2018 at 4:14 AM - A lovely poem, Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:17 PM Thank you, Sunshine,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Demetrios Trifiatis June 8, 2018 at 3:11 AM Impressive imagery dearest, Eve. Good luck Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Demetrios,,Hugs Eve ~’*

Tom Cunningham June 8, 2018 at 12:31 AM A great four liner Eve, them redwood's look awesome, lovely pic to accompany it. Good luck. Tom. Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Tom,,Hugs Eve ~’*