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natures beauty and reflection

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lake-side swans splish splash
white sails drifting on mirrors
a boy sees double

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Sara Kendrick

June 2, 2026 at 4:48 AM

I like this one. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

June 1, 2026 at 9:21 AM

Dear Connie, I always love a great Haiku, especially about swans, the splash, the boy catching two worlds at once. You keep it simple in the best way. A small pause by the water that stays with me longer than I expect. Blessings, Daniel

Connie Pachecho

June 1, 2026 at 10:08 AM

Daniel, thank you for the cup of tea. The picture I created reads both ways-the contrast between line 1, splish splash (wild), and line 2, white sails (elegant), and the swan's reflection in the lake--which prompts the boy to see double--nature's beauty and reflection (hence the title). In line 1, I wrestled for a while and came up with the adjective lake-side, which condensed the line perfectly.

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