nature-ocean

the endless ocean
with rippling and foaming waves
simply glides and sways
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:31 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Zohra :) - Great haiku :) - hugs
Jabeen  Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Thank you so much!!😊
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:20 PM
Great euphony in this one. Congrats on your win
Jabeen  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 9:39 PM
Thank you!!
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Zohra, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful ocean haiku.
Jabeen  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 9:41 PM
Thank you!!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:14 PM
Hello Zohra Jabeen :-) Very nice! Have a nice weekend!
Jabeen  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:48 PM
Thank you so much!! Wishing you a nice weekend too!!
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:30 PM
Lovely construction showing both movement and size.
Jabeen  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:49 PM
Thank you so much!!
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:03 PM
This is a fantastic Haiku; it depicts a vibrant and tranquil vision of the ocean, reflecting its inherent beauty and rhythmic motion. The infinity of the ocean is depicted, implying a vastness that is both timeless and limitless. The imagery is vivid, with sensory perceptions of rippling and foaming waves evoking a feeling of the ocean's active presence.
Jabeen  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:54 PM
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the beautiful words of praise. It always encourages me.
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