Nature Whispers

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Valeria Iliadou-Nature, Four In One


Billowing wind, hands can't tame your brunt
With holy oaths you unlock life's hunt.
Miracles are melting while sharp rain breaks,
As each loss is just a change
-Earth's fatal redemption-
An instinctive bending under the peal of a thunder,
A choice to silence the deafening mediation,
Hidden in holes dry.
Natural randomness, the path of a human life.
There is a stolen fire, divine
And guilty traces on human hands,
-You can smell smoke and coal on finger lines-
Rough lines, on them walking minds greedy.
Rockets fired and we applaud,
Yet the dawn of the fiery sun lies in the eyes of the wise,
Only.
And melodies are coming from the bottom of the ground,
In the midst of our time.
November. Birds are calling for peace,
Yellow birds, on yellow stones, on branches carved
On leafs' grace, they are calling for peace,
Seeking the days of the Summer,
When sun returned
Wise and peaceful
As a King crowned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/3/2011 5:33:00 PM
You are a great poet.Thanks for sharing this meritorious work of art
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:28:00 PM
Very well crafted, this was a pleasure to read.
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:25:00 PM
smile -- upon your final verse my thoughts were brought unto Solomon and yet even he, as great of wisdom given was vulnerable unto falling and thus, ringing true this fact that the wisdom of the world is mere folly unto, "The 'King of The Universe; Alpha & Omega.'" ~ thus, i myself shall seek the Only Wisdom which shall Ever matter at all; and this, the Light of eternal life beyond this passing moment amid the fog....wonderful painting my dear -- love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:47:00 PM
Love the detail and descriptiveness~ WONDERFUL~ november birds calling for peace~!
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