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Nature Sings, Andaree

When perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight, star-speckled gems mirror jade moonlight. Listen to the rain-kissed springs as dawn the breeze brings. Rhyme of heart sings abstract art within warmth of wings~ fluttering ruby red rings, shifting through mists of hazy midnight when perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight..

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/2/2024 6:20:00 PM

IE, a very kind and loving description of nature. You do this so well. A real pleasure to read and I also like the simplicity. My mind has trouble on some of the more complex work you do, but I try.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/30/2024 5:05:00 PM

Great job, Ink Empress! CONGRATS on your well-deserved sin. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2024 8:32:00 AM

You did so great for not having seen the form before, Ink. I think my last Andaree contest was maybe 3 years ago. Outstanding imagery. Congrats.

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2024 5:29:00 PM

Lovely rhyming... I love the way your words are just magic on the page

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 4/23/2024 10:45:00 AM

Such mesmerizing verse you have written, dear Ink! Very gentle expression of a spring rhythm. Loved it! -Smita

Silent One

Date: 4/23/2024 9:30:00 AM

I have no idea how to do this form, but I am sure Andrea will love this.. she always loves your poems.. All the best in the contest..

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 8:30:00 AM

Dear Ink, your poetry is truly captivating and filled with an abundance of joy. The gentle melody of raindrops on the spring leaves, accompanied by the soft whispers of the wind, creates a soothing lullaby for the soul. You are fully immersed in the experience! The text is beautifully crafted, exuding a sense of tranquility and deep appreciation for the wonders of nature. Your writing is skillful and flows effortlessly. The first and last lines are truly captivating. Good luck with the contest.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/23/2024 5:26:00 AM

I just loved this poem, soft yet full of energy and admiration for nature. Interesting I just wrote a poem titled "Nature's Song" Haven't submitted it yet. Letting it ripen on my desk :-) Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2024 5:05:00 AM

Much revelry you convey, my friend--in this delightful poem: Listen to the rain-kissed springs, as breeze of dawn brings~ rhymes of heart.. sings--- I hear and feel it!

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 4/23/2024 3:29:00 AM

perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight, Mmmmm the mesmerizing beginning!!! Listen to the rain-kissed springs, as breeze of dawn brings rhymes of heart.. mmmm I love how you make words flow like breeze of fresh air papi… oooo the opening line n the ending are the same … it hits different aeee .. gorgeous papi

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2024 1:50:00 AM

I always admire the ease with which you write your poems with such alliteration. I tried it once which you read, but I found it difficult. You seem to be in your element. Your Andaree is so well constructed. Best for a win.

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 4/22/2024 11:23:00 PM

Ruby red wings … amazing