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Nature Sings, Andaree

  When perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight,
star-speckled gems mirror jade moonlight.
Listen to the rain-kissed springs
as dawn the breeze brings.
Rhyme of heart
sings
abstract art
within warmth of wings~
fluttering ruby red rings,
shifting through mists of hazy midnight
when perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight..

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Gary Radice

Date: 7/14/2024 10:16:00 AM

I actively sought out an example of your rhyming Ink Empress as I just love to read rhymes and really enjoyed this. I was fascinated by the form and rhyme scheme and then noticed the word Andaree in your title..Andrea’s form. I’m a little slow when it comes to noticing things like that :) I’m not usually a lover of rules in poetry because, for me, they tend to slow the flow but you have managed to stick to the tight rules and deliver an excellent poem. Love the alliteration too. Cheers - Gary.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:21:00 AM

Its so good to hear from you dear gary: so kind and thoughtful of you, and i do enjoy reading rhymes altho, i dont always rhyme as they dont come easy for me. Like restrictions i feel like rhymes restrict me but i admire those that can rhyme so effortlessly. Andaree was a challenging form but i loved it. I appreciate your poetic presence truly. Sending you light

Tonye George

Date: 5/4/2024 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations dear Ink. Loved the rhymes. The form looks tricky but you nailed it as you always do.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:22:00 AM

Thank you sweet tonye alwys

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/2/2024 6:20:00 PM

IE, a very kind and loving description of nature. You do this so well. A real pleasure to read and I also like the simplicity. My mind has trouble on some of the more complex work you do, but I try.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:23:00 AM

Thank you dear duke always hah so kind of you to try, despite how different we write you still show me such sincere support. It can be a task to decipher my words sometimes for some. I appreciate always your poetic presence

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/30/2024 5:05:00 PM

Great job, Ink Empress! CONGRATS on your well-deserved sin. Janice

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:24:00 AM

Dear janice haha i do that too do typos you accidentally wrote sin that made me smile! I appreciate your well wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2024 8:32:00 AM

You did so great for not having seen the form before, Ink. I think my last Andaree contest was maybe 3 years ago. Outstanding imagery. Congrats.

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:24:00 AM

Sweet andrea i appreciate you, so very much i hope you do know that thank you so much

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2024 5:29:00 PM

Lovely rhyming... I love the way your words are just magic on the page

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:25:00 AM

Awwn so sweet of you dear paige appreciate you

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 4/23/2024 10:45:00 AM

Such mesmerizing verse you have written, dear Ink! Very gentle expression of a spring rhythm. Loved it! -Smita

Ink Empress
Date: 7/14/2024 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much dear smita so kind of you to visit and comment appreciate it so very much

Silent One

Date: 4/23/2024 9:30:00 AM

I have no idea how to do this form, but I am sure Andrea will love this.. she always loves your poems.. All the best in the contest..

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 8:30:00 AM

Dear Ink, your poetry is truly captivating and filled with an abundance of joy. The gentle melody of raindrops on the spring leaves, accompanied by the soft whispers of the wind, creates a soothing lullaby for the soul. You are fully immersed in the experience! The text is beautifully crafted, exuding a sense of tranquility and deep appreciation for the wonders of nature. Your writing is skillful and flows effortlessly. The first and last lines are truly captivating. Good luck with the contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2024 5:05:00 AM

Much revelry you convey, my friend--in this delightful poem: Listen to the rain-kissed springs, as breeze of dawn brings~ rhymes of heart.. sings--- I hear and feel it!

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 4/23/2024 3:29:00 AM

perfumed pearls rest within tulip twilight, Mmmmm the mesmerizing beginning!!! Listen to the rain-kissed springs, as breeze of dawn brings rhymes of heart.. mmmm I love how you make words flow like breeze of fresh air papi… oooo the opening line n the ending are the same … it hits different aeee .. gorgeous papi

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2024 1:50:00 AM

I always admire the ease with which you write your poems with such alliteration. I tried it once which you read, but I found it difficult. You seem to be in your element. Your Andaree is so well constructed. Best for a win.