Nature Refreshed

alba golden hue
glisten in the morning dew
nature hence refreshed

August 18, 2020 
Haiku – Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchen
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Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mark, great imagery. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Eve
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:28 PM
alba is a new word for me, lovely lines mark, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Koplin Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:59 AM
It was actually on rhyme zone. Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:31 PM
So lovely, Mark. Congrats on your win!
Koplin Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Mark, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
Koplin Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much Tania for giving me a placement
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Very, very nice Mark. You have captured those precious moments in early morning when all of nature is "refreshed." Congratulations on your winning placement.
Koplin Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Sam!
Nicole Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 8:23 PM
There is something about the morning dew sparkling upon the ground- that is so breathtaking. Such a beautiful picture you paint with your words. :) Brandy
Koplin Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Brandy. I appreciate your time and support. Thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Beautiful! Ku’s are rays of sunshine...little journal entries...a treat.
Koplin Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Thanks Kim I appreciate your time
Poetry Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Golden poem hue flash of mind splash natural poetry perfum salute alkas
Koplin Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Thanks Alka
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:54 PM
I don't think I've ever heard dawn referred to as 'alba' before your first line. Nicely written, Mark.
Koplin Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Good then it’s something different lol . Thanks Jenna
Cunningham Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Love the imagery Mark, that time of day that begins everything from new. Good luck in the contest Tom
Koplin Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:53 PM
Thanks Tom, have a great day my friend
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